Monday, August 8, 2011
Here's one fit for the hours between breakfast and lunch. Do you like my poem?
very "proverbial", very post modernistic stylewise, and a i like the qualities of a social commentary that you bring to the table here. you miss out on the hood or brownie points id have given you for meter, even if it was free verse, as i hate free verse, but it was a decent poem, one of the best ive read recently from the general public. but to be real with you, saying i liked it would be stretching the truth, and not just because i think true poetry has been dead for almost a half century now if not longer.
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